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Living in Death
Contributed by
eternal_sorrows
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Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 01:50:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm angry, I'm hurt with deep inner pain
lost in confusion, going insane.
In life's destiny day to day
I stumble in darkness every step of the way
I often wonder how this got to be
alone in the world with no one but me.
There's no where to run to and no place to hide
praying to God is useless,I've already tried.
Time passes quickly in so many ways
yet, not so when you count the days.
Life is short or so it is said
but, how do you live when you're already dead?
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2003-12-17 13:50:17]
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Re: Living in Death
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by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 02:02:15 PM AEST
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This is amazing, it had me captivated from start to end, i love the rhyme scheme, and the theme and it was all round a great poem.
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: Living in Death
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by MissLee on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 04:24:04 PM AEST
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sigh..." Life is so short or so it is said
but, how do you live when you're already dead"...that got to my heart, or what is left of it.
good write.
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Re: Living in Death
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 09:24:41 PM AEST
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"how do you live when you're already dead?"
Love it... it gets me. Think I just found my new msn nickname for the time being. Thanks. Great write!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Living in Death
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 11:18:21 PM AEST
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| Wow... That last line is totaly me. I really liked this poem. |
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