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Who Am I?
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 02:32:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The worlds slipping away from my eyes
I cant reach out, touch, hold close to my heart
My death seeps from within
Enveloping me in this dark art
Who am I
What is this evil Ive become
What have I got left
What have I done
Freeze up my emotions
So they dont belong
I cant bear them any longer
Theyre killing me, theyre too strong
Who am I
Who do I want to be
Take my life away
Let me be free
Blackened thread, needle and thread
Cant you sew up my heart
Stop the edges from fraying
Its tearing me apart
Who am I
This little b**** in my head
Ill never be free
I wish I were dead
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Re: Who Am I?
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 02:36:58 PM AEST
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wow very strong I must disagree however that yer heart is cold or dead it can't be to feel as deeply as you do. Loved it all...
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Re: Who Am I?
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by MissTea on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 02:40:32 PM AEST
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| Who am I? Am I worthy of this world? Have i a future? I do not know but I know one true thing! I AM a child of God, and with Him i Know I AM something even though to all i am nothing! God Bless you! And a very good read |
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Re: Who Am I?
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 03:44:04 PM AEST
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| dearest charlotte, this is very moving, my heart goes out to you, big hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Who Am I?
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by maria_mendonez_ibardolas on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 05:14:27 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed this poem very much.hope things will get bettter for you.You are a special person in Gods kingdom and to everyone who knows you. |
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Re: Who Am I?
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 09:42:53 PM AEST
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I love the last stanza! I feel the same way. Great write!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Who Am I?
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 11:27:52 PM AEST
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| I agree with Joel here. This was filled with emotion. Very powerful emotion. |
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