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So Beautiful
Contributed by
SpreadYourWings
on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 09:39:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Somethings missing and it can't be happening The lights have dimmed
And my clumsy eyes keep falling to you
My letters are shredded
But my words have not been silenced
The hallways are empty without your footsteps
And the classes no longer beam with your light
The voice has changed but it still keeps its meaning
The picture can only service one feelings:
To hide one more to surpass the day.
He is able to have the sky be trapped in his eyes
And the rays of the sun flow into his hair
The strength of his destination holds my faith
I only praise to decease what's missing
So that these photos can stay on the wall
Rise, awake dear sound
Tremble to the meaning that intimidates
Be silenced with the movement of his rays
Do choose to leave upon such beauty
Become frail with each sight
And unworthy to hold such excuisite scenes
Remind me of such glorious conceptions
That we've marked to find again
So that we can never recall such convictions
To let go of this well-favored misery
For I would rather not know
Because knowing has destroyed me
Copyright ©
SpreadYourWings
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2003-12-17 21:39:50]
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Re: So Beautiful
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 01:55:23 AM AEST
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| Wow ... painful emotions in this ... and extremely well written ... great poem .... Jan |
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Re: So Beautiful
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 08:21:13 AM AEST
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This is one of the best poems i have come across
It was so beautifully written
Remarkable
Very well done
Love
Angelxxxxx |
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Re: So Beautiful
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 03:29:49 PM AEST
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| breathtakingly lovely:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: So Beautiful
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by PumpkinPie on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 12:09:05 AM AEST
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So beautiful, indeed your poem is ! I can relate to your poem and find comfort in reading it. Thank you,
PumpkinPie |
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