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Dawn
Contributed by
TheSpiritx
on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 03:39:11 AM in AEST
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The wait
For Dawn
Sun hiding
Moon rising
In dark
Benighting
The blue
Crushing blue
Floating in air
Coming
Upon us, down
On us
And I wait
The night sky
Stars fly
Left and
Right
They shoot
Across, far
Near to me
Bang, one two
Bang.
Like bullets
Fiery and red
Without
Lights here
Fireflies
Fluttering
Midst of fields
Singing
Splayed against
Moon emitted
Radiance
Reflection
On water
Surface
Show the moon
Shadowed
I am, soon
Shadowed in
Brilliance
Of sun again
When the
Star smiles
Upon me
Lunar flight
Solar peeking
Out at night
Up it comes
Black to blue
To orange, pink
Cloud
Scurries from sun
Flee, shroud
Let the rays
To me
Shimmering days
Now gone
The moon,
Dawn
Copyright ©
TheSpiritx
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2003-12-18 03:39:11]
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Re: Dawn
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by emystar on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 06:44:07 AM AEST
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Very creative!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Dawn
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 12:17:52 AM AEST
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exquisitly beautiful, i do so love this style of poetry, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Dawn
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by Clarity_Rising on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 11:27:41 PM AEST
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I really like how you describe the
night sky as a story. This poem
is very creative. I like the quick,
few word descriptions in this poem.
It gives it a very nice flow. |
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