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Appearing So Lovely
Contributed by
jacquelynne
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Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 11:21:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You're breaking my heart so softly
While I'm dreaming of you so lightly
All the things I'll never have
are waiting so patiently
And I'm wondering so opposingly
Why my soul is closely drifting
above my tarnished body
So softly my hear shatters
My mind distortedly thinks
of just how lovely you appear to be
and then I think
before I fall away
Too bad you are so beautiful
Copyright ©
jacquelynne
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2003-12-18 11:21:49]
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Re: Appearing So Lovely
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by jme on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 11:32:54 AM AEST
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| Nice write! Expressed well. |
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Re: Appearing So Lovely
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by Kie on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 01:03:08 PM AEST
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Delicate and beautiful
Kie |
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Re: Appearing So Lovely
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 05:16:10 PM AEST
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Written well
Beautiful and tender
Love
Angelxxxx |
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