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Walk Away
Contributed by
LJ
on
Thursday, 29th August 2002 @ 08:52:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The loudest thing I ever heard
Was when you never said a word
You turned your back and walked away
Assuming that Id be okay
Fallen down and all alone
You were the one to throw the stone
I have feelings and I hurt
Please dont treat me just like dirt
I trusted you with all of me
Its from you that now I flee
Captured in an icy stare
Hurt like this is very rare
Ill pick up the pieces of my core
Rebuild them in a quiet roar
My life has never given me slack
So walk away and dont look back
Copyright ©
LJ
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2002-08-29 08:52:36]
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Re: Walk Away
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by Suzy on
Friday, 30th August 2002 @ 06:43:07 AM AEST
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Awww LJ this is so sad. I'm hoping this is fiction, but if not then well I hope things look up for you.
Lasca |
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Re: Walk Away
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by LJ on
Friday, 30th August 2002 @ 05:03:18 PM AEST
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| I only wish it wasn't true |
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Re: Walk Away
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by Bizzy on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 12:37:44 PM AEST
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Dear LJ, This version is very good. I'd have to see them side by side to choose the best.
Love, Friend Bizzy |
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