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Moonsong
Contributed by
Suz
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Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 05:39:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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In the prairies distance grow golden soft strings,
So happy tonight as I whistle my tune,
Mellifluous voices, a thousand violins,
And I dance with the crickets, under the moon.
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Suz
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2003-12-18 17:39:59]
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Re: Moonsong
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by Aika on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 06:42:43 PM AEST
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| I do not know if the best , but surely very nice! aika:-) |
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Re: Moonsong
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 07:44:49 PM AEST
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how about "Dance With The Crickets"
Very nice write! |
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Re: Moonsong
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 11:34:57 PM AEST
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I LOVE the title!! Don't you dare change it!!! LOL
Very pretty little poem... I found the first line a little difficult to read, but that's probably just me being blonde, lol. :S
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Moonsong
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 09:54:40 PM AEST
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| This is a delightful piece. Of all I have read so far I don't think it is your best. But it brought a happy smile to my face. Rita |
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