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Consternation
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
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Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 09:22:06 PM in AEST
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"Frankly, my dear, the ketchup is in the other shoe."
Eeew.
But, seeing it be true,
better me then you,
and when I walk it makes a squishy sound.
"Would you like fries with that?" is,
with flies, of course,
Your lies, their force.
Tightens my chest, I
am frightened,
no rest, thy,
of thee
truth,
I am frightened.
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2003-12-18 21:22:06]
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Re: Consternation
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 12:00:55 AM AEST
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Interesting indeed in all honesty I like yer dark poems better, but thats just me and sometimes a little change in style and structure can be good for the soul and poems that don't scare the whee children is always good as well.
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