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Struggling
Contributed by
Adreana
on
Thursday, 29th August 2002 @ 11:26:30 AM in AEST
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Needing a way out
Of this problem I have created
Accepting the mistake
Being denied any help
Want the problem solved?
Work with me here!
I have created this
I now want to destroy it
This thing that runs me
Which brings me worry
This thing I can't forget
Which follows me everywhere
In every moment and breath
I am a slave to my mistake
I try and try and try to break free
But somehow the hole is too deep
I cannot find a way up
To tell me that I have no choice
That I must give in to this
Is to tell me that there is no hope
Without hope, there is no me
I am nothing but hope
I do nothing but hope
Hope pushes me farther
But I do not only hope
I work hard to create new paths
So why will this path not change
Why do I see a dead end?
Life cannot have dead ends
Not until death takes over
I won't accept what is standing before me
There must be a way
There must be a way
If there is still hope
There must be a way
Copyright ©
Adreana
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2002-08-29 11:26:30]
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Re: Struggling
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by Butterat_Zool on
Thursday, 29th August 2002 @ 11:42:08 AM AEST
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| Sorry things aren't great for you... It'll work itself out though. In the end it always does. Just do what feels most natural and you'll wind up being the beautiful and talented adreana that i know and love. Great write. Have a hug, and a smile. Butterat Zool. |
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Re: Struggling
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 29th August 2002 @ 01:11:34 PM AEST
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I can identify with this poem.... I have had those feelings lately... think positive...things will get better.....Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Struggling
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th August 2002 @ 03:25:51 PM AEST
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| I know how you feel right now. The feeling like your life has been torn apart like a house that has been hit by a tornado! Hope things improve! |
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