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Sweet Descension
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 03:09:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Sweet Descension
On this night of cruciation,
my hellions desecrate me;
raping, touching,
cleaving, hacking,
pushing me to the edge of life...
Then falling,
ever falling,
oh God, help me,
the blood and flesh
are sticking in my throat
and I can't breathe...
My flesh
is dripping from my bones,
shattered fingers sunk to the knuckles
in pulverized eye sockets...
I smile as it all implodes...
Copyright ©
SensitiveSoAbused
... [
2003-12-19 03:09:09]
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Re: Sweet Descension
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 03:53:09 AM AEST
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I'm surprised no one has commented on this yet. I love the imagery in this VERY dark wow u blow me away every time.
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Re: Sweet Descension
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 09:56:28 AM AEST
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| Just got to read it. That should tell you how far behind I am. This was wicked dude. It was so totaly sick in just the right way. Awesome. |
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Re: Sweet Descension
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by Lessa on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 01:16:30 PM AEST
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| Really morbid in a beutifully sick kinda way |
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