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Please Approve
Contributed by
bhavnas
on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 03:10:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Sleepless I turn to thee ,
Restless I feel within.
Blankness has crept in me ,
The more I dwell ,
more empty I feel within .
I know the route is circuituous ,
Incidents tumultuous.
Do I care to feel for you?
You loved and cared ,
Here Iam ready to tear you.
Ruthless I was not ,
A change of heart is what I got.
I tried hard to dissuade ,
Pushed it hard to evade .
Tried ,tried ,Oh! I tried my best ,
Yet I failed to suppress .
I battled for you inside me ,
Hard I tried to conquer me,
Yet I lost ,
And I lost me.
I lost your prized possession ,
Whom you had always loved it seems.
It withered ,it decayed to deflect.
Your love I scorned ,
You will believe so.
Iam worthy of contempt
And not to be adored.
But tell me ,
Tell me just for once,
What do I do ,
When I face my soul by chance.
The smile , the eyes ,
I searched so long ,
The look , the depth
I yearned till now.
The longing to laugh together ,
The way I want.
What ,Oh! Please tell me ,
What do I do?
If my desires get together and haunt.
In you I searched ,
I found him not.
I tried to make you him ,
I could not.
Now that I have found him
Mine he is still not.
And shall not be ,
I know this too.
I pledge ,
I shall forever be with you.
But do grant me just one wish
And hence will never ask for more .
To live ,I will live with you
But will die in his arms
I request , please approve.
Copyright ©
bhavnas
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2003-12-19 03:10:40]
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Re: Please Approve
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by venkat on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 03:54:18 AM AEST
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| Good flow..keep them coming on. venkat |
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Re: Please Approve
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by jaeann on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 03:55:03 AM AEST
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| oh my goodness.....you had me step into my world had i made a different choice........wow......i found him not.......yes!!! |
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Re: Please Approve
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by EmSal on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 11:21:45 PM AEST
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Wow what a write! It got to me. Was extrememly awesome. All the best.
Emma. |
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Re: Please Approve
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 10:00:21 AM AEST
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| Whoa... I don't even know what to say.... Very good is all I can think sadly. |
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Re: Please Approve
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 11:53:41 PM AEST
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How sad not to be with the one you truly love but to have to find love for the one you are with,or at least a mutual understanding. I can only hope this is just a poem and not a truth in your life.
Rainbows,
Rita |
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