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Contributed by
pyrochick
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Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 07:43:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
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This place is like a prison
With bars on its windows
No way to get out
I sit and stare at the walls
Play house with my dolls
I sit and scribble what's on my mind
Life outside is what I think about most of the time
What if I find a way
A way out of this place
What would they do
With me out of the way
Would they care,
Shed a tear,
Or find me and take me to another place
I can imagine a better place
With no bars or locks
A place where I am welcomed
And free to live a life I've dreamed of.
Copyright ©
pyrochick
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2003-12-19 19:43:09]
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Re: no title
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 08:02:55 PM AEST
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Still trying to figure out what this is talking about---- a literal prison or a prison of the mind, soul, hmmm......It could work a number of ways if you think about it.... Any ways....this is a great write. this poem really puts a trapped feeling into you..... Yet there's hope at the end. It's got the whole dark, despair thing, but there's a light at the end of the tunnel. I like that.
Well done =)
God bless,
Ellen |
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by Candi on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 08:45:08 PM AEST
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| this really brought back memories, whether you mean litteral bars or just mental bars, i understand the feeling fully. great write. thank you for sharing it with me. |
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Re: no title
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by Pyrochick on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 11:27:48 PM AEST
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| this wasn't meant for a literal pison mostly it was on the mind i sometimes feel trapt so i wrote this |
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