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Until Now Forgotten
Contributed by
Vitreous_Soul
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Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 05:30:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Every now and then there comes along A small detail to bring up a picture Every now and then I remember But this love, I wish to forget her
It's a coincidence when you find An unmarked box underneath the foot of the bed It could very well be Pandora's Housing the warmth and dreams which are dead
A single stack of photos lies within Memories come flooding back with a roar As if by chance one falls from the middle Landing face down upon the floor
Written in small letters Conveyed through tear-smudged ink Three simple little words The mere sight made my heart sink
As I reversed the picture to the front In fear of what would meet my eyes Myself and another wearing smiles At the time I didn't know they were lies
Again I gaze at the back of this frozen moment Knowing i'll forget it never A tear rolls down my face as I read Three simple words; "Always and Forever"
But still, I couldn't forget that time As painful as it maybe now Even if I desired to My heart would not allow
There's no real way to banish these thoughts Never quite sure how I'll just forget until the next time I remember What was forgotten 'til now
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Re: Until Now Forgotten
(User Rating: 1 ) by Perfect-Imperfections on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 07:21:00 AM AEST (User
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we know there is no such thing as forever except forever itself, and yet we find pleasure in expecting things to stay forever.., your poem is wonderful. the feelings are exquisitely potrayed. congrats on writting such a poem!
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Re: Until Now Forgotten
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 07:54:38 AM AEST (User
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Well written..interesting.."But still, I couldn't forget that time As painful as it maybe now
Even if I desired to My heart would not allow"
.. welldone my friend. venkat
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Re: Until Now Forgotten
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 01:16:20 PM AEST (User
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BRAVO! Again and again, VS. You are astonishingly poetic now! You really hit the heart strings of everyone here VS. We go back and look at the past....and remember what we were feeling at the time that didn't last! Tremendous impact on us all. Like flying on our "Time Machines" go back and reliving....but also "feeling" what it was like then, and now! I recently looked at my wedding pictures...when I was saying vows to my beloved husband....if I had known at that moment he was going to die 10 years later....would I have still married him? And after he did die..I could never use the word "if" again. If only I'd have done this, or "If" only I hadn't have done this, would he have survived?
Marvelous poem indeed, VS your talents are shining like the huge star on the Christmas Tree! Beautiful Light!
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Re: Until Now Forgotten
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadly_blaZe on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 01:23:03 PM AEST (User
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This poem really touched me... I was sitting online holding back the tears because i was just upstairs and passed something someone gave to me... it was a christmas gift the one i still love gave me last year.. it was a picture of me and him holding each other capturing the memories of the day ill never forget and the person ill never stop loving... this poem was very touching and it was a pleasure to read it
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Re: Until Now Forgotten
(User Rating: 1 ) by secretwind on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 01:14:11 AM AEST (User
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BEAUTIFUL...SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL. |
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