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The ONE
Contributed by
perfect-imperfections
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Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 07:11:09 AM in AEST
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You searched it in the cosmos, in the oceans, and the cloud,
Seeking it in Hell and Heaven and wandered all about,
The oceans of knowledge and profoundness seem to be in vain,
Cause you just cant find IT, though youve searched again,
In finding your lost Peace irremediable loss youve done,
Hearts you broke and miseries awoke and all that cant be undone,
The unending Desire for the truth is lingering on and on,
For the truth which lied inside you had long ago forgone,
All your life you wonder if there would ever be such a day,
This Gothic search would be over with satisfaction all the way,
Your eyes cant find the Truth; the truth beneath the lie,
Where every man is knave and deceiving he will try,
Having looked in the world around you, losing hope with every stride,
You took so long to find outside you, The One who resides inside!
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Re: The ONE
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 08:16:03 AM AEST
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Striking poem
Wonderful
Expressed beautifully
love Angelxxxx |
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Re: The ONE
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by poetrygodslove on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 08:25:32 AM AEST
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| THIS was perfectly done...I felt I was reading a poem from a professional poet...one I would find in a book....well done.....high 5...sandy |
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Re: The ONE
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by Cobalt on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 10:42:45 AM AEST
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| I think this was a wonderful poem with a great message. I liked how it was worded very good. |
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Re: The ONE
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by drgnreborn on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 12:30:01 PM AEST
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| Thanks, you've reminded me where I ought to be looking. |
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Re: The ONE
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 06:13:10 PM AEST
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this was beautiful very nicely worded and something I can relate to. I have searched for peace and hope in all the wrong places. Very beautiful poem once again I hope to see a lot more from you.
Bobo (Joel) |
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