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In The Dark
Contributed by
Blaq_rose
on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 12:46:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Alone,
Quite,
Summer rain.
Cold,
Numb,
Feel no pain.
Shadows,
Shade,
Engulfed in the black.
Femme fatal.
Stab in the back.
Solemn,
Secret,
Live but unseen.
Gasping,
Falling,
Silent scream.
Spiraling,
Swirling,
Unending doubt.
Rejection,
Redemption,
Lost inside and out.
Copyright ©
Blaq_rose
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2003-12-20 12:46:26]
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Re: In The Dark
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by shelby on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 04:02:33 PM AEST
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WOW!! pure power and emotion here well done.Welcome to YPDC
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Re: In The Dark
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 06:07:12 AM AEST
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Very good job. You paint a vibrant picture with so few words. I look forward to seeing more of your work.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: In The Dark
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by Desi on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 10:23:41 PM AEST
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Good Write Jane, Keep it up...
Friends always~
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Re: In The Dark
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 12:42:24 PM AEST
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"Engulfed in the black.
Femme fatal.
Stab in the back."
I like this a lot. Nice work. |
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Re: In The Dark
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by FunkyMonkeyMania on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 05:47:01 PM AEST
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very nice. you write so well. its so descriptive without being tedious or overworked. i wish i could write poems that are somewhat ok. hrmph, o well, i shall ust have to read yours, which are very good.
the irreplaceable emily |
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