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Apathy Killed Again
Contributed by
nightrider
on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 03:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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sitting alone
sitting so still
stare at the wall
wish you were dead
look at that girl
look at her eyes
so bright and alive.
but look deeper inside
the pain is there
if you look
the tears are there
if you search.
she needs a friend
if you care
but there is no reason
to notice her pain.
you've got your own life
that's what she knows
she wants to help you
tell her all your problems
she'll hold them deep inside
keep them safe.
let you cry on her
let you vent on her
she cares
she knows your pain
she is always there.
but someday,
you will see
that she was hurting too
and maybe,
on that day
you will wish
that you bothered to look
deeper into her eyes.
that you had bothered to ask
that you had bothered to care.
she'll be dead and gone
her eyes so blank and glazed.
the bright crimson seeping out
her only true friend twinkling
innocently
in her hand.
he walked her to her peace
he held her hand all the way
he was the one who stroked her wrists,
and said it would be ok.
not you
not me
no one but a razorblade
was there in the end.
you let her down
you didn't care.
WHY NOT?
why didn't you bother to see?
why wasn't she good enough?
why is she gone...
why...
Copyright ©
nightrider
... [
2003-12-20 15:30:00]
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Re: Apathy Killed Again
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by Remy on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 04:53:43 PM AEST
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oi vey, so dark. well regret breeds change i suppose, i love this write!
~Remy~ |
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Re: Apathy Killed Again
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 06:25:05 PM AEST
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wow... this was complete, utter beauty... I am in awe this was so awesome and so painfully true struck me hard.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Apathy Killed Again
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by SkYYBLu on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 06:52:03 PM AEST
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| WOW!! I feel like this sometimes. This was a truly awesome poem. Keep it up! |
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Re: Apathy Killed Again
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by deadly_blaZe on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 06:53:29 PM AEST
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nicely conveyed
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Re: Apathy Killed Again
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by SinfullyTwisted on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 11:59:37 PM AEST
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| I'm kind of -speechless- here. A very dark, thought-provoking, heart-piercing write. Beautiful job. |
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Re: Apathy Killed Again
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 11:32:43 PM AEST
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Sometimes people are just too blind to see our pain.
Very well done
Larry |
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Re: Apathy Killed Again
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 11:48:49 PM AEST
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| we never know anothers pain do we? well written and important message not to lean against the wall of life and just watch it; not participating, ...perfect title too:) hugs n' love nessa |
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