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Its All Your Fault
Contributed by
Chanti
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Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 07:06:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I cant say what im feeling,
im feeling just too much,
im feeling like i want to feel,
the kiss of a razorblades touch,
im feeling like i want to kill,
the first thing that i see,
to put every ***** whos stood in my way,
out of misery,
to break the dreams of anyone,
who tells me that i cant,
to grind every perfect thing,
into a grain of sand,
to turn the world upside down,
then crush it in my hands,
to lie down, curled in a ball,
because what ive become, i just cant stand,
so many things run through my mind,
all because of you,
i hate you now,
i hate you now,
i wont stop my feelings from cutting through.
Copyright ©
Chanti
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2003-12-20 19:06:34]
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Re: Its All Your Fault
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby1987 on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 02:57:35 PM AEST
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Hey! dis iz cool. It describez how bein' a teen can suck sometimez &how u get flooded with emotionz and feelinz. Dis descibez how i feel.
GR8 WRITE!
U GO GIRL!
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Re: Its All Your Fault
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by a_t0rtured_s0ul on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 04:29:28 AM AEST
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| good write...expresses the extreme feelings people can feel. |
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Re: Its All Your Fault
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by jessalynn on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 08:27:03 PM AEST
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naw your not angry
you really bring the reader in..sitting on edge of seat bitting side of mouth |
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