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The World Never Sleeps
Contributed by
LouisaMontagu
on
Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 01:20:32 PM in AEST
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every little noise i hear wakes me through the night
the only thing that watches over me is the moon until the light
the warm orange glow of the streetlights capture my glance to the sky
every star is a soul which once felt time sail by
when night arrives silence at last peace is all around
id sit on my windowledge as raindrops shatter on the ground
the cars race by as the sirens fade someone is hidding from light
they havent got long, i hope they get caught
its nearly the end of the night
Copyright ©
LouisaMontagu
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2003-12-21 13:20:32]
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Re: The World Never Sleeps
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 01:52:42 AM AEST
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I really liked the feel of this. Made me wanna go sit in the dark and write something. Your wording is beautiful. Great job!
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Re: The World Never Sleeps
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by Kie on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 09:22:14 AM AEST
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"every star is a soul which once felt time sail by" ---This just totally undid me. This poem was wonderful to read.
Thank you for sharing it...
Kie
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Re: The World Never Sleeps
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 09:28:57 PM AEST
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Words well chosen and a picture well painted.
Wonderful !!
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