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A Better Life Than This
Contributed by
jme
on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 09:48:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Did someone forget to give me my key
to happiness
All alone and adrift at sea
Anguish and misery
It's what's bottled up inside of me
My rainbow, it has no pot of gold
Life's not fair - so I've been told
I feel like I've been left out in the cold
I watch from the outside, while luck passes me by
Jealousy and rage, these feelings don't die
I smile, I grin, my heart it don't lie
Circumstances return me back to this place
Unable to look this World in the face
What is it I've done to be standing in these shoes
What have I done to obtain this bruise
I'm not looking for pity - Don't want any of sorrow
I'm just searching for a better tomorrow
Copyright ©
jme
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2003-12-22 09:48:06]
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Re: A Better Life Than This
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by Kie on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 10:38:38 AM AEST
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I have felt on more than one occasion the many things said in your poem. Up and down is life sometimes...
Your poem was deeply expressed and I really liked it.
Kie |
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Re: A Better Life Than This
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by loopylou on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 12:58:54 PM AEST
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very good poem,shame about the feelings,hope life picks up for you
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Re: A Better Life Than This
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by Remi on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 06:16:18 PM AEST
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| nice write i have wrote many poems like that so i understand the feeling |
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