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lobotomized heart
Contributed by
stitches
on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 01:21:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
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a rip
in the vortex
mincing words
struggling
hope drowning
cracked thumbs
diabetic love
insulin dependent
tears a dream
no release
scars burn deeper
refuse to bleed
knife in my back
just out of reach
you lie
you accuse
you whine
like a child
to a child?
vicious cycle
maybe fall
are you scared...again?
do you need a hug...again?
will i find you in bed...again?
pound the walls
with bloody hands
scrape and crawl
like a desperate man
gouge out my eyes
so as not to see
the pile of useles s***
you made me
Copyright ©
stitches
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2003-12-22 13:21:23]
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Re: lobotomized heart
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by jme on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 05:34:58 PM AEST
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| Very powerful words. Very talented. |
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Re: lobotomized heart
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 12:12:13 PM AEST
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Very powerful writing! Blew me away...
Kie |
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Re: lobotomized heart
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:25:26 AM AEST
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I loved this very angry and poetic in its disturbingness.
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Re: lobotomized heart
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 02:39:30 PM AEST
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| For some reason I can't wrap my mind around this poem completely. I think it was a wicked write though. Such power behind it as well. Wondeful. |
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Re: lobotomized heart
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by afraid_of_fear on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 07:15:44 PM AEST
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this is incredible.. painful but amazing, as is all your work..
charlotte x_x_x |
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