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Newbie
Contributed by
TamTam
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Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 05:11:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I am writing at my windowsill,
From which the moonlight illuminates.
My mind is racing.
One question makes it this way,
Does he feel the same way as i do?
Complications, lifes full of them.
Conquering them one at a time,
Only makes us stronger.
A single tear forms a pool of sorrow,
As i think hes to phenomenal to be with me.
Every word he speaks,
I listen in anticipation.
Every thought he shares,
Heightens my feelings for him to a new level.
And this i do not understand,
For weve only known eachother a few weeks.
But yet those few weeks feel like eternity.
Copyright ©
TamTam
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2003-12-22 17:11:48]
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Re: Newbie
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by Kie on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 09:43:33 PM AEST
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I loved what you said about a few weeks feeling like eternity! That is an intense passionate sort of experience.
Thank you for sharing this..
Kie |
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Re: Newbie
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 08:13:18 PM AEST
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My word!!! This is the oddest thing, but I could relate to every single thing you said in this poem! The little details I mean..... I'd love to know more about this story. Seems you and I are in the same boat. (unfortunately, right?)
At any rate, this was a nice poem. And uncanny in it's resemblance towards my situation! =)
~Ellen |
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