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it's coming down
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 09:41:25 PM in AEST
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tonight, the tears have finally come
two years or more since i've felt their sting
they come with tremors
they come with laughter
they come with the fear that i'm losing my mind
too much at once
too much to say
and too few ears willing to hear
and the one i need to listen the most
doesn't trust me enough to hear a single word
alone, it all adds up inside
alone i lived
alone i will die
alone i wonder if anyone can help me
alone i wonder if it's too late
now i can't help but punch
faces that i once tolerated
words that i once could ignore
now pound through so loudly
that my third ear bleeds
she's already lost to me
i can't reach her
i've pushed her so far away
now we just share a house
and maybe a child
everything else is territory
a possession
no more "ours"
only "yours" or "mine"
my teeth grind and i can't stop shaking
i'm begging for help, but i can't accept it
i'd try the pills but it's already too late
all that is left is all that there ever was for me
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Cancer
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2003-12-22 21:41:25]
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Re: it's coming down
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by Joy on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 09:54:55 PM AEST
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| VERY SAD!!!! |
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Re: it's coming down
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by secretwind on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 10:38:56 PM AEST
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| YES THIS IS VERY SAD. |
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Re: it's coming down
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 03:56:19 AM AEST
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this was good as always Roy although u have me kind of worried remember that u can always talk to me if u want to I hope that writing stuff helps u as much as it helps me. Take care of yerself buddy it would be a crime to lose you.
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Re: it's coming down
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 05:55:41 AM AEST
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| aawwww f***.......wow......THAT is deeply painful....... |
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