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Destiny ?
Contributed by
harshreality
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Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 10:45:33 PM in AEST
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These feelings are suffocating me...
So many thoughts running through my mind,
That I can hardly breathe -
Where are the answers I've been trying to find!
I can't tell if I'm coming or going...
Lost somewhere in between -
My lifes been put on hold,
I guess it's a time for growing.
Its the same thing day after day...
The routine has begun to get old;
This confusion just won't go away.
How will I know,
When will I be able to see?
I don't want to let go...
And later find out -
I gave up my destiny.
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harshreality
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2003-12-22 22:45:33]
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Re: Destiny ?
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by forever_lonely on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 11:12:55 PM AEST
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Is love logical.... honestly no, to put your heart and emoitons out on display easily effected by other, then no, but then is life logical, living for the ultimate reason of dying. Love is something none of us could live without, in the same way none of us can live, without dying is love logical ...no... is life... just as much... no.
Great poem really push the emotion of what your putting across, i really like this keep up the great writing luke |
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Re: Destiny ?
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by positivelypurple on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 04:03:19 AM AEST
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| Similar to the poem I just posted. Very nice...I don't think there is any logic to love. Wish there was! But then it probably wouldn't be real love in the first place! |
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Re: Destiny ?
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 02:30:26 AM AEST
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Love and life together are confusing. Who knows. All have their own opinions and experiences. Good write.
Emma. |
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Re: Destiny ?
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by swiftsouljah on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:19:04 PM AEST
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| ahhh how i feel that how i live that.... |
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