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Sickness
Contributed by
PsychoticDreamz
on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 01:10:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
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This sickness overflows my body
each waking moment without you
I cannot control it anymore
I want to get away
My weakness is showing
so be it
I cant control it anymore
You'll say our time will come
to be together forever
...but I cant help worry
things change
I dont want to control it anymore
What about the "What ifs"?
Why cant this be easier?
instead of increasingly more difficult
each day, week, hour
I wont control it anymore
It breaks me down to hide
unknown pain
Taking all my strength and
letting it show..
I do not mean to worry you
I dont control it anymore
If only I knew what to say
what causes it..
Only you make me happy
without you..I'm tortured
constantly hurting
constantly wondering
worrying..
this sickness now controls me.
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2003-12-23 01:10:29]
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Re: Sickness
(User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 02:11:35 AM AEST
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This is a sad but beautiful write.. I can understand these feelings here.. sometimes we need the one person who don't feel the same or they hurt us ... this is an awesome write
peace joy and hope
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Re: Sickness
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:50:53 AM AEST
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Hey, I like this
constantly hurting
constantly wondering
worrying..
You say the sickness controls you, but thats a choice u can control it and master it as well you are strong and u can fight it.
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Re: Sickness
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by depresseddiva on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 10:16:46 AM AEST
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| your really good at this stuff i just dont think ive got the hang of it and but anyways talk to ya later if your online |
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