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not ready to give up
Contributed by
infedelity_hurts
on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 03:51:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
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something to think of,
as i trudge head down through lonely streets
in desperate search for a comforting smile
some pearly white affection,
but its not going to happen...
why are relationships like matches?
the longer you hold on,
the more it burns,
a scorching repentance,
love is fire,
and in your eyes burns a flame,
flickering and dimming,
not enough to light up my life,
but enough for you to be the love of my life
can't see past your burning flames,
through to your lies and embers
floating towards me with an inviting gloom
this burning leaves scars,
the physical heals,
the emotional deals,
the psychological stays,
to haunt the new,
with a fresh batch,
well on the way,
scars change color,
they are the colors of sunsets,
sunsets are red hot warnings,
my scars so vast and populated are freckles,
i am polka-dotted,
because of each new chance with you...
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Re: not ready to give up
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by Chanti on
Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 11:29:41 PM AEST
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Great write! I really liked how you describe love
Keep on writing,
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