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Untitled
Contributed by
harshreality
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Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 08:56:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Maybe I should call to let him know I care;
If he doesn't call back,
I won't do it again -
This time I swear ....
I know he's just afraid;
We talked so long the other night ....
Now he's pulling away -
Can't get too close,
I know how this game is played!
I'll try a few more times periodicly ....
Know I said I wouldn't,
But our last conversation really got to me ....
If its been long enough,
Sometimes I get lucky -
And he'll open back up;
It happens ya know -
He really does care....
And if I catch him at exactly the right time -
He lets it show.
Those are the moments I live for.
Everytime I hope and pray,
He won't turn from me anymore ....
This will be the time that changes everything,
This time he'll forget to pull away....
It wasn't though,
Not tonight;
But tommorows another day ....
Another chance that he might.
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harshreality
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Re: Untitled
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by EternitysLyre on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 09:09:41 AM AEST
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| Hope. |
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Re: Untitled
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by 13Hopes on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 09:18:31 AM AEST
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I agree, Hope.......
Never give up..
Cheers
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Re: Untitled
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 09:58:05 AM AEST
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I cant think of a title, but the feeling I get from this is Imperfect Timing. Hoping you catch them at the right moment , but it never quite happens.
I truly enjoyed this.
Larry |
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Re: Untitled
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 11:08:43 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this... thanks for sharing.
As for the title -- depending on the perspective you want to get across... "Another Chance That He Might", "This Time I Swear" or "Not Tonight" would all be great titles. |
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Re: Untitled
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by Cobalt on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 01:58:35 PM AEST
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| I agree hope... This eerily reminded me of me... Kinda scary. I liked it alot though. |
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Re: Untitled
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 02:28:14 AM AEST
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Good write. Truth expels from your words. How though can so many people believe this just to get hurt time and time again. I might not have been in the same situation as you, but I have been in something very similar. Thanks for sharing.
Emma. |
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Re: Untitled
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by swiftsouljah on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:26:23 PM AEST
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Pull away
or
moments i live for
but yeah caught in the same cycle... |
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