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Another Early Morning
Contributed by
LiveTheDream
on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 03:51:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Whisk away to another world
Flying ever slowly
Following the golden path of light
Another early morning
Water droplets shimmering
Green cascades are gleaming
Shadows of a lonely night
Drowning away behind them
Following ever surely
A flight of birds are joining
All working their way towards
Another early morning
And yet the people sleeping
Dreaming still of their future
Lie in such abundance
Unaware of the sudden daybreak
A rush of wind below their wings
Gliding them down the path
The path of such warmth and radiance
That leads to another early morning
But still the Earth lies still
And quiet surrounds us all
Of what once used to be
A restless, shaken night
Noises waken the shadows
Trouble rests no more
Sunlight breaks the ice
Another early morning
A chosen ritual with such joy
A pattern formed across the sky
A glorious wakening of my eyes
To watch as they fly away
My window pane below me
Condensation on the glass
Rays of light above me
On this early morning
Am I just a waking fool?
Or trapped in this pleasant dream
The truth that no one is awake
I know this morning is mine
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LiveTheDream
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2003-12-23 15:51:51]
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Re: Another Early Morning
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 05:33:25 PM AEST
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I like this very much ...tranquil...you might want to reword the "but still the earth lies still"
other than that I think it is quite beautiful so serene ...thank you for sharing
Shari |
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Re: Another Early Morning
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by keilajo on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 07:04:41 PM AEST
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| I agree completly with Shari. That was the only thing that stoped the flow, but only for a second. Other than that...It was very, very beautiful. Thank you |
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Re: Another Early Morning
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by mercedes on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 11:17:26 PM AEST
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| This is a good write. Good luck with the competition |
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