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Broken Storms
Contributed by
Eve
on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 06:38:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Storm clouds rolling in
Placid lakes turning to tumult,
Rain has just begun.
Waiting all alone
The wind whipping at my back
Whilst time slips away.
Got to quit trying
You're fixing what's not broken
Stop before you break...
Copyright ©
Eve
... [
2003-12-23 18:38:18]
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Re: Broken Storms
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by fallensilence on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 07:19:14 PM AEST
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| i was intrigued by the title when i saw it on the main page and man was i blown away when i actually read it. great job. |
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Re: Broken Storms
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 10:22:43 PM AEST
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| mmmhmmm...whilst time slips away......yes!!! |
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Re: Broken Storms
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 07:38:48 AM AEST
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That's it, I quit. This was stunning. I'm at a loss for words, as there's so much to take in here. I guess it's something special if the explanation needs to be longer than the poem! I can't write anymore, i'll never be this good. Awesome, stellar, and everything inbetween.
Keep writing, or wake up as a yuppie (????),
-V.S. |
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Re: Broken Storms
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by Cobalt on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 02:17:07 PM AEST
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| I think I understood in my own way. This was a very unique write. Deeply awesome though. I really liked this eve. |
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