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Abandoned
Contributed by
BrghtNSnshny
on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 07:07:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Torn apart by hatred
Never to meet again
Sunshine is forever gone
Takin' over by tears of dispair
Wrecking of lives, homes, and families
Loves lost in the dark
Clouds of gray rolling in
Cry of torment fill the air
Nothing will make it out alive
But the few that are strong
Copyright ©
BrghtNSnshny
... [
2003-12-23 19:07:48]
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Re: Abandoned
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by Lessa on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 07:34:39 PM AEST
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| thats really great, i almost ameks me feel the feelings involved in it |
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Re: Abandoned
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:55:17 AM AEST
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I have been through this this is really strong!
Merry Christmas
Michelle |
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Re: Abandoned
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 09:36:07 PM AEST
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I liked this very sad though especially since I know and can relate to where yer writing from. Stay Strong...
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