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Mother Nature's Touch
Contributed by
Schnikes13
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Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 08:25:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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An autumn gust takes away the shine
Of a summers golden days
The leaves fall, like the joy of children
Who long for the times blas
The multitude of colors,
Falling to the dark, damp land
Is like the hopes of all the ones
Being crushed by mother natures hand
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2003-12-24 20:25:36]
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Re: Mother Nature's Touch
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 12:22:35 AM AEST
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Absolutely Beautiful....the words in this poem
really touched my heart. The imagery was fantastic as well....I could not only see it in my "Minds Eye!" I could feel it as well....
My what talent you have.....use it well....and to the enjoyment of us all!
Lovingcritters.....I love fall....but I've never written anything this lovely before....what a great poem you write.
You should write a poem for every season. Capture it like this one...was real!
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Re: Mother Nature's Touch
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by Mouth on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 08:25:05 PM AEST
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This is beautiful. I really like it, alot...
The last two lines are especially powerful and true..Great job, love it!
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