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all alone
Contributed by
sexy
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Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 09:49:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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im all alone
its dark its lonely
ive got no where to hide
with only darkness to comfort me
no one understands
im in a room full of people who say they care
but im soo alone
they say they're there for me
but they cant help
i cant figure this out on my own
im trapped in a jail called my home
my mother's a demon to me
all my life she never understood
i have only my self but thats not quite enough
the darkness overwhelms at times
but it is my companion
its the only thing thats always there
it never fails
my heart is ice
just like wut fills the air around me...darkness
is wut fills my body
my eyes
my heart
no longer something to save
and my friends
they are bittersweet
they are the closest thing to family that ive got
they at times can be my light in the darkness
but even thier light is dim
i am all alone and the darkness grows colder
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2003-12-24 21:49:03]
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Re: all alone
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by secretwind on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 10:42:59 PM AEST
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This is so sad....yet so very real.... you are not alone.
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Re: all alone
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 12:04:39 AM AEST
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reach out, reach out, get on the phone and call a "hot-line" they can help I know I'm on one! They can put you in touch with people that wlll never ever let you down, and even
help you cope with your Mother.
Don't isolate yourself...reach out and get help. This was a lovely poem...I felt everything you wrote..please don't stay alone..find help!
lovingcritters
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Re: all alone
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by mountainhigh on
Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 04:54:11 PM AEST
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| It's nice to know that somewhere out there, someone is feeling like me. So I guess that makes it not being alone, and something to smile about. Thanks for sharing. Tomorrow when you wake, may all the things you wished for come to light and may the season bring, you comfort and joy, and may the new year be the best of all!!!!! |
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Re: all alone
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 10:28:52 PM AEST
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"they at times can be my light in the darkness" - man, that line got to me. That totally got under my skin... me and my ex best friend used to use that term exactly when it came to each other... creepy. Well, hey, now that you've made my skin crawl, great write. Everyone is alone sometimes. It won't last forever. I relate to this poem more than you know. But how can you have a heart of ice when you crank out something that touches someone the way you just touched me? Remember that.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: all alone
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by SAT on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 04:26:44 PM AEST
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| love it! :D |
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