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Two Sides
Contributed by
CuttersAngel
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Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 03:50:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I scream aloud but silently cry
I continue living but have already died
I show my smiles but hurt inside
I continue with life but don't really try
I pretend to be happy but secretly carry shame
I pretend life is a journey but know it's a game
I pretend everything's fine but it's all burning in flames
I pretend not to care but will forever know his name
I tell them I'm fine but sometimes I'm insane
I say I feel peace but really feel pain
I say I don't cry but really my tears are rain
I tell them it doesn't matter but really it's all in vain
I tell them he's gone but really he's here
They think I hate him but he'll always be near
They think I'm strong but I live in fear
They think I don't cry but my blood is my tear.
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CuttersAngel
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2003-12-26 03:50:20]
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Re: Two Sides
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 04:01:00 AM AEST
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wow this was so amazing you've thrown down another one that I can so relate to it tears at my heart
I continue living but have already died
I show my smiles but hurt inside
Those two lines... wow I can't say enough. This almost made me cry... keep up the writing.
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Re: Two Sides
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 05:50:24 PM AEST
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They think I don't cry but my blood is my tear
Man, that got to me... great write, it really touched me.
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