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Bruised
Contributed by
DeadInside
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Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 02:43:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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My bones are bruised
My head is bent
I cannot find
An open end
I've searched my soul
I've taken less
Desensitized
We put ourselves in this position
A society based on self interest
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DeadInside
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2003-12-26 14:43:31]
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Re: Bruised
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by CuttersAngel on
Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 02:49:52 PM AEST
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| You did a good job. I like how it sounds. |
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Re: Bruised
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 11:54:24 PM AEST
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great write i enjoyed it .. good job
peace joy and hope
JENNA |
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