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in the void witha glimmering rope of hope

Contributed by infedelity_hurts on Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 03:20:03 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

there,
i layed still,
while my blankets were slowly crushing me,
they felt as if they were sheets of metal,
pummeling me into my mattress,
the feeble springs inside struggled to support my weight against there excessive power,
what they were experiencing is a feeling i was mutually aquainted to,
i felt it snap several vertebrae,
its determination to show its supremacy allowed it to be careful,
'kind' enough to leave feeling in my bdy from head to toe,
so i could be aware of this spiral of unkind feelings it had forced upon me,
it restricted my emotions,
to those of a darker nature,
those represented by the color black,
'how considerate...'

now,
i am freed,
the gates have been unlocked, chains clang softly at my feet,
they are beneath me, behind me now,
i take my first step outside,
a sudden ingrained impression of exuberant geniality,
washes over my entire being,
cleansing me of unwanted emotions,
that recently flowed fluently throughout my soul,
my walk now has a spring in its step,
because my bones no longer feel captive to imperior forces

and,
now i know,
exactly who to thank, who receives the medal of my undying love,
my gratitude is directed to my princess,
whose crown's glistening light freed me from my greatest fears,
and who sends love in herds of trucks,
its overly hefty load is too heavy for the earth's crust to support,
it falls through into the atmosphere,
where in the abyss, time loses track of itself,
and we really can be together forever...

Copyright © infedelity_hurts ... [ 2003-12-27 03:20:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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