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In a World I don't understand
Contributed by
wildcard1506
on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 10:36:21 PM in AEST
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I live in this world
It's difficult to understand
Hatred devouring countless souls
Who never felt God's hand
I live in this world
A world of animosity
Where one's pure hatred
Sparks another's curiosity
I live in a world of deception
No way to lose or to win
I'm lost in the darkness
Of another's shadow of sin
I live in this world
Among small children's fears
Age knowing tomorrow isn't promised
And they let go of unfallen tears
I live in this world
Where nothing is as it seems
But I can escape to tranquil peace
Inside a child's dreams
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2003-12-27 22:36:21]
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Re: In a World I don't understand
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by a_t0rtured_s0ul on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 02:39:53 AM AEST
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| very nice. the world is big and mean. its nice that you have some place to hide. :) |
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Re: In a World I don't understand
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by Mouth on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 08:44:14 PM AEST
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All my wisdom(not much) tells me that we will never understand this world. I think what matters most is trying. Your poem speaks for alot of people who feel the same way. We are in the darkness, but at least we have a voice. Thank you for using your words to brighten even the darkest of places. Nice work...
Sarah |
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