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Hole In Her Heart
Contributed by
MisterRight
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Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 03:16:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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She has a hole in her heart
So empty and vast
Can only be filled
By a love from her past
He has an ache in his heart
That continues to grow
His love for her
He will never let go
She has her life, a family,
And a boyfriend she cant leave
But this hole in her heart
Someone to fill it she needs
He has his heartache and pain
And his dreams that were broken
The memory of his true love
And the I love yous unspoken
She calls him late one night
Feeling upset and alone
A thousand thoughts fill his head
As he answers the phone
He asks her whats wrong
She tells him shes fine
Though the sorrow in her voice
Shows every time
He tells her he still loves her
She replies with I know
He knows she loves him too
But cant let it show
He listens to her talk
Offering his comfort in return
His eyes beginning to tear
His chest starting to burn
To give her what she needs
He puts his feelings aside
As the tears roll down his face
The tremble in his voice he hides
She tells him that she misses him
That maybe they should meet
He hesitates for a moment
Then with a quivering voice agrees
He meets her for a drink
Her beauty cuts him like a knife
Again he hides his pain
For loving her is his life
They sit and they chat
About the good times and bad
He leans towards her and whispers
You re still the best Ive ever had.
I love you like no other
Like Ill never love again
My heart is yours if you want it
You just tell me when
He softly kisses her forehead
Runs his hand down her cheek
She smiles at him for a moment
But not a word to speak
He knows his words are heard
But their meaning somehow lost
He knows thats what she needs to hear
And only his heart suffers the cost
He makes several trips to the bathroom
He closes the door and cries
Pulls himself together and buries the pain,
Wiping the tears away from his eyes
He wont let her see how hurt he is
Hes there to comfort her
He hopes for just a moment
She might remember what they were
Again he joins her at the bar
Sits quietly at her side
Wondering how to prove his love
Theres nothing he hasnt tried
She says some things in a loving tone
Though hes not sure what they mean
He knows he has no chance with her
And nothings as it seems
As the night moves on they embrace and kiss
Who kissed who, is never clear
Soon shell realize she made a mistake
And push him away, out of fear
With that kiss, his pain is washed away
And his dreams are back alive
But he knows it takes more than a kiss
For these dreams of his to survive
His head is engulfed in conflict
As hope struggles with the past
But hes made his choice to always be there
His only wish, that this night will last
But the night soon ends as all nights do
And they leave to take her home
She gives him a hug and says goodnight
Already he feels alone
The only comfort he can find
Is her smile and its glow
Hes given her love to fill her heart
His pain shell never know
He knows again hes done his job
The hole in her heart is gone
Hell say, I love you before he leaves
And his lonesome life will go on
Shell go back to the life she knows
And forget what it was she needed
Hell go back to the pain he feels
All of his emotions, depleted
Hell spend his days awaiting her call
Knowing hell be needed again
Soon the hole in her heart will return
And hell have to fill it again
He hopes in time the day will arrive
When she can finally see
She needs him to complete herself
And I need her to complete me
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MisterRight
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2003-12-28 03:16:36]
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Re: Hole In Her Heart
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 05:10:28 AM AEST
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This was so captivatingly beautiful and so damn sad. So damn sad cause I've been in this situation before. This write just speaks to me in a way I can't explain.
"Already he feels alone" - true, true, true!
This was an awesome write. Thanks for sharing. All the best.
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Re: Hole In Her Heart
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 05:13:04 AM AEST
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AMAZING!
I do not know your work, but I think this is beautiful!
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Re: Hole In Her Heart
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 06:32:53 AM AEST
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amazingly beautiful and bittersweet brought tears to my eyes...
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Re: Hole In Her Heart
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by dumfries on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 09:26:13 AM AEST
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| I don't usually see a long read that I like. But this is one. Prose to me must draw the reader in to read more. I felt it here. |
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Re: Hole In Her Heart
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 11:41:02 AM AEST
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I remember you and your writes. It's good to see you back and posting such beautiful poetry again my friend.
Well done and welcome back
Larry |
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Re: Hole In Her Heart
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 12:45:25 PM AEST
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Great to see you again, Mr Write..:>). This is such a captivating write... sad and beautiful....
I hope you had a good Christmas and that all your dreams will come true in the new year.
Welcome back...don't be a stranger..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Hole In Her Heart
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 04:41:51 PM AEST
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| As I read this, my heart bled for you ... I'm so sorry to read that you are still living this pain ... although this is a wonderful piece of poetry ... nice to see you back ... Jan |
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Re: Hole In Her Heart
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by harshreality on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 07:16:49 PM AEST
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| I feel like the man in this poem. Its describes a situation I'm dealing with myself, so closely that it hurts. I'm glad to see I'm not the only one who feels they have to be there for the one they love even if it hurts. I hope everything works out for you. I truly do. I know how hard this is. Right now I'm in the waiting stage. He needed me last sat. Haven't really talked to him since, but if he calls I'll be there. Best of luck.... Never give up. |
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Re: Hole In Her Heart
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by shelby on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 09:07:09 PM AEST
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this is awesome!!
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