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a place to call home
Contributed by
Candi
on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 10:40:06 PM in AEST
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they say home is where the heart is
so where is it?
where is my home?
my little blue house
with the gray shudders
and the picket fence
that holds the dog
that is always happy to see everyone
where is it?
all i've ever wanted is to have a place
where i am comfortable
where i can go and kick back
and relax
and feel safe
i can't find it
i'm lost
wandering the world
in search of a home
a place to lay my head
my place
it wont burn
it wont fall down
it wont crack
or get taken away
it will be mine
my home
my safe haven
my dream
Copyright ©
Candi
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2003-12-28 22:40:06]
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Re: a place to call home
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by ravenrain on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 02:43:42 AM AEST
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| I love this for some reason...it hit me inside some where hidden deep...great writing. raven |
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Re: a place to call home
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 06:39:54 AM AEST
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I understand so well how you feel... I wrote a poem awhile back called Somewhere To Come Home To, basically the same idea. Great write!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: a place to call home
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by Stalkee on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 09:56:59 AM AEST
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| *looks at ravens comment* hit me somewhere deep as well...I liked this a lot, great job! lookin forward to another one =) |
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