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the little girl that couldn't
Contributed by
Candi
on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 05:31:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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wake up little girl
too much sleep is bad for you
sit up straight little girl
drink your milk
be a good little girl
dont talk back
make your bed
it's all in your head
cry somemore
another chore
clean your plate
no staying up late
watch your mouth
stay on the couch
never leave the house
no life
no friends
pray it ends
Copyright ©
Candi
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2003-12-29 05:31:32]
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Re: the little girl that couldn't
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 08:40:08 AM AEST
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You must have had my mother. Did you get the beatings too?
I hung out with my dad.
Cars, boats, Trucks, planes.
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Re: the little girl that couldn't
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 08:43:19 AM AEST
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Another thing...sometimes when a poem is not read, think.
What is the first thing that is seen?
Not the Author's name , but the title.
That hone's the edge.
Only the material can wreck the poem after that. |
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Re: the little girl that couldn't
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by Stalkee on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 10:01:06 AM AEST
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| this was sad (I guess is the work I'm lookin for) but I enjoyed it...great write |
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Re: the little girl that couldn't
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by Stalkee on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 10:01:38 AM AEST
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| or word rather, not work lol |
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Re: the little girl that couldn't
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 11:19:07 PM AEST
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I liked how this was done....You must have known my aunt!!
Jenni |
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