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TIME
Contributed by
Manda2
on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 02:21:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Thank you Time for letting me walk with you,
Dragging behind as we realise my new paths
On the same journey with nothing ever remaining
Only the reassurance that you'll always be by my side.
We'll share the wonderful changes that make us go on,
Four different seasons all with their own glory
Many kinds of birds that sing an ever new song.
Writing all the wonderful verses of my own short story.
How generous you are, our sweet and giving Time!
You give to us all youth, vitality and wonder,
You are always there watching over us, soothing our grief
Through hail and storm, lightning and thunder.
Time is not our enemy to fight against and resent,
Without it, there would be nothing, never any repent.
The Lines on our fathers faces show that Time is with us,
thankfully.
Copyright ©
Manda2
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2003-12-29 14:21:44]
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Re: TIME
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 07:14:24 PM AEST
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"The Lines on our fathers faces show that Time is with us"
I loved the flow of your poem and the finale left me speechless....I enjoyed reading this so much.
Kie
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