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Cry for Me
Contributed by
hope
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Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 12:46:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Im ok
Its what I often say
Who understands anyway, is how I relate
Noone knows the pain we hold inside
The walls weve put up, the tears weve cried
The inner child who is so lost inside
We keep the walls up to close her inside
We tell her dont cry, Ill keep you safe
Close your eyes, keep them tight
Ill lock the door, were out of sight
Noone knows were hiding here
Go ahead you dont have to fear
Cry, cry, I wont let them see your tears
Cry for the hurt youve endured
Cry for the abandonment you carry
Cry for the loss of your innocence
Cry for your betrayal
Cry for the little girl whose smiles were few
But most of all will you cry for me too
For after all me is you
Copyright ©
hope
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2003-12-30 00:46:31]
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Re: Cry for Me
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 04:18:19 AM AEST
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Very powerfull, moving write!
I can tottally relate!
weldone!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Cry for Me
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by Fudge on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 09:37:25 PM AEST
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| wow this is great. i like how you've ended the poem. it reminds me of a few i have written. its great to see how people express their feelings in very different ways. hope to see more of your stuff on here. |
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Re: Cry for Me
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 12:50:27 AM AEST
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| Cry, for it can heal the heart. Cry with hope, and the tears will be bright like stars. |
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Re: Cry for Me
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 02:15:57 AM AEST
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My heart cries for you.
Take care Hope.
David |
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