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Flight
Contributed by
christopherfriedrich
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Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 01:36:46 AM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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"Flight"
I have such a short attention span
But I dream for days of you.
The circumstances won't allow it now,
But soon enough we'll make it all come true.
All I think about is you
When I lay down in my bed
I dream constantly of you
And you never leave my head
Just know that if I lived any closer
You'd never be alone in your life
Because if my dreams were an indicator
You will be my wife.
My life might be silver now,
But it'll be gold when I touch your hand,
Cause the one day that I live for
Is that day when my plane will land.
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christopherfriedrich
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2003-12-30 01:36:46]
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Re: Flight
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 01:51:35 AM AEST
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Very sweet-n-good luck.
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Flight
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 11:28:36 AM AEST
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wow... that's so beautiful. :)
All the best to ya...
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Re: Flight
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by faith_my_eyes on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 09:13:02 PM AEST
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| this is a sweet write. I love the line "My life might be silver now/But it'll be gold when I touch your hand"- Very creative! I hope that your life will be gold very soon! |
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