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Ashlee's Poem
Contributed by
darien
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Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 02:17:49 PM in AEST
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This world can be a crazy place
But through it all I found you
And even though I've made mistakes
I need you with me to see things through
I can't tell you everything I feel
I wouldn't know where to start
But I know my emotions are real
I can only tell you what's in my heart
No matter how things turn out to be
I will always feel the same way
And even if you refuse me
I would still think of you each day
I'm not turning back from here
I've made my final decision
I want you to know I love you dear
Even if I can't tell you in person
Copyright ©
darien
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2003-12-30 14:17:49]
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Re: Ashlee's Poem
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by Elf on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 02:42:46 PM AEST
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I dont think its corney at all. In fact, I think quite the contrary. Its a good write. Very sweet. I hope all goes well with her.
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Re: Ashlee's Poem
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 06:06:03 PM AEST
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Oh Darien,
What very touching sweet, and loving write...if she thinks it's corny...you better drop her fast....she hasn't feeling for you that will last.
This was a marvelously well written, and heartfelt poem. She should be honored, and tell you so!
lovingcritters
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Re: Ashlee's Poem
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 06:11:38 PM AEST
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Corny!! NO WAY!! This was very beautiful... I'm sure she loved it....
Happy New Year..
Jenni |
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Re: Ashlee's Poem
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by Estelle_Toh on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 08:27:38 PM AEST
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How sweeeeet and romantic!
Estelle |
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Re: Ashlee's Poem
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 07:57:52 AM AEST
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| Definitely not corny, in fact it was pretty romantic. :) |
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Re: Ashlee's Poem
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 04:47:50 PM AEST
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Thoughtful & romantic. A nice write.
Best of luck.
Kie
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Re: Ashlee's Poem
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by kori31 on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 06:49:30 PM AEST
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| Hell yeah! That's beautiful!!!!!! |
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