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Bright Vision
Contributed by
fionndruinne
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Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 07:00:48 PM in AEST
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The falling fog was dim and white
Upon the mountains and the sea
The gulls were wailing in their flight
Like keen laments they seemed to me
The surf was pounding on the strand
As I went walking there alone
Behind me was a shadowed land
Before the sea as grey as stone
But then I lifted up my gaze
And saw the sunlight far away
Had broken golden through the haze
And on a distant island lay
From far away there came a spark
Of light as bright as burnished gold
As I stood staring in the dark
And shivered in the sudden cold
And on the wind came sound of song
That pierced the heart like wielded sword
With Love and Joy and Sorrow strong
And that for which there is no word
But then the clouds reclaimed the gleam
And crashing waves drowned out the sound
As if I had but dreamt a dream
And naught was there but gloom around
And though I stayed upon the strand
And wandered sadly by the shore
I never saw that shining land
Or heard that wondrous music more
And then there came a sunlit day
And I went down beside the sea
I took my harp in hand to play
Lamenting for my memory
But then came one along the sand
A girl whose hair was flowing free
The colour of a sun-bright land
And coming near she smiled at me
Her voice to me was wind-borne song
As I walked with her by the shore
And found what I had sought so long
May it be with me evermore
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Re: Bright Vision
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by Blaze on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 07:21:44 PM AEST
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| It's beuatiful. :-) |
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Re: Bright Vision
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by faith_my_eyes on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 05:33:40 PM AEST
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| Beautiful! Very romantic and wistful. I emjoyed the dreamlike quality of this poem. |
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Re: Bright Vision
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by emystar on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 08:02:24 AM AEST
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Very interesting as my grand father that I never knew was McCool so I'd luv to learn more of your customs and how to search my heriteige from the or mid 1800's.
Any info will be appriciated grately.
this is tottally awesome!
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: Bright Vision
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by liquidsunshine on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 02:28:18 PM AEST
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Awwwww, I love it! Positively dreamy! Shows me you're quite the splendid dreamer, actually.
Bravo and encore.
Love,
Chelsea |
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Re: Bright Vision
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by emystar on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 05:54:55 AM AEST
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Very good writing and quit entertaining to read.
Keep up the great work.
luv, huggs,
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Re: Bright Vision
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by Tanmaya on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 04:40:54 AM AEST
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Mysterious and enchanting.
'Her voice to me was wind-borne song
As I walked with her by the shore
And found what I had sought so long
May it be with me evermore.'
More than words...
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Re: Bright Vision
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 02:31:57 AM AEST
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Such beauty! A bright vision indeed - call me ignorant, but I never thought you could rhyme as fluently and as masterfully as this!
Am truly impressed - and surprised. One of the most remarkable works I've had the pleasure to read in these hallowed halls.
Thankyou for procuring this one, Andrew.
It Gave me a smile in the heart. |
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Re: Bright Vision
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 11:14:48 PM AEST
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| Aww! Such a lovely write! |
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Re: Bright Vision
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by Sir_Odd87 on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 07:23:54 PM AEST
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| I really like this one... |
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