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All The While, I Wish For Faces I Can Never Hold Again
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
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Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 12:47:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
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All the while
Sitting, reading into this
I wish I could see you again
Staring back at me through the mist
Haunting as the ghosts of winter
Cold and in distress
I remember the stars that held your face so lovely
And the windows down always the best
Sorry for all the things that I'd said and done
I've lost the touch, and you're the one
I wish I could tell you
All the things that hold me up so high
Wishing these lost hopes forever
And waking up wishing only to die
Standing on feet so broken
Thinking with a head so full
An explosion of nowhere
And it's your pin to pull
The constant thoughts that hold me
And you, the demon that would render
I wish you could hold me
My arms in your surrender
Everything I can't remember
And all the thoughts I can
Wake up from being pathetic
Become a better man
Consequences that we render
And the voice that you lost me to
I wish you could see me
Hold me back like you used to do
I wish all the hopes and dreams
The months scratched into a wall
It's the consequences you run from
And yet, I am here to catch your fall
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Re: All The While, I Wish For Faces I Can Never Hold Again
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by a_t0rtured_s0ul on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 03:48:02 AM AEST
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| very nice..i hope you are better |
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Re: All The While, I Wish For Faces I Can Never Hold Again
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by EmSal on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 05:32:08 AM AEST
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I liked this write.
Emma. |
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Re: All The While, I Wish For Faces I Can Never Hold Again
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 01:10:27 PM AEST
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| I for one think this write was absolutely amazing. It felt as if you put all that you were into writing it... All that you were feeling... I could feel power behind it. Totaly deeply awesome. |
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