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A Reply To Teenage Angst
Contributed by
Katie-Kate
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Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 02:19:01 AM in AEST
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>You’re the CENTRE of attention,
>The party CHICK!
>Where we’re with MY friends – you rule!
>And with yours – I’m just the HICK!
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>>>BUT THAT’S RIGHT – IT’S ALL ABOUT
>>>YOU!!!
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>You ALWAYS steal the limelight.
>NO matter what you do,
>The world is ALL good,
>As long as it’s watching YOU!!!!
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>>>BECAUSE EVERYTHING’S ABOUT
>>>YOU!
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>When it was YOU who had problems,
>You who needed HELP,
>I tried to make you HAPPY!
>DEDICATED my life to your health.
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>>>ALL
>>>YOU!!!
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>But sometimes I need help!
>I just need an OPEN ear,
>You asked me what was WRONG!
>You PRETENDED that you would be here.
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>>>BECAUSE I HURT TOO!!!
>>>
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>So i told you what i FELT,
>i CONFIDED with my trust,
>You summed up my WORLD in two small words,
> teenage ANGST!!!
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>>>BECAUSE IT CAN’T BE ABOUT ANYONE
>>>BUT YOU!!!
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>You say I’M insecure,
>Well i - wonder WHY!
>YOU cut me down at every step,
>Before i met YOU, i was just shy.
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>>>NICE WORK!!!
>>>
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>But now I’m SCARED to have an opinion,
>You’re always PREACHING to just be me,
>But if someone’s not like YOU!
>You DESCRIMINATE too – can’t you see.
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>>>YOU AND YOUR
>>>HYPOCRACY!!!
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>SEE life for what it is,
>Accept that OTHERS matter too,
>Everyone has their OWN stories,
>AND THEY DON’T
>>>>REVOLVE AROUND YOU!!!
Copyright ©
Katie-Kate
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2003-12-31 02:19:01]
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Re: A Reply To Teenage Angst
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 11:07:05 AM AEST
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| How immature are you, that you feel you need to put f***ing in every line? Poetry is about emotion but f*** is not an emotion! Grow up and maybe you could be a good poet. |
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Re: A Reply To Teenage Angst
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by Katie-Kate on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 09:33:00 PM AEST
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| Well considering that my poem was edited, it can be assumed that you read it before hand - therefore, not-so anonymous. so how are you? and as my poem was placed under the 'angry poetry' section, it can also be assumed that it was based on anger. anger is an emotion, and i can express it as i wish. not all of my poems are this way, and i do not belive i need to 'grow up' because that judgement was made by ........... ha ha, YOU!!! what do you know about me, except that you think you have the right to critisize others emotions - yes emotions. tis you who needs to grow up my friend. (besides, i am only 16, lol, i can grow up in my own time) |
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Re: A Reply To Teenage Angst
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by Wrybod on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 03:56:25 AM AEST
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Good on you Katie Kate. I thought your poem was a very accomplished work (and I am not an annonymous non-entity. My work is here for you to judge)
March on! Don't stop the column for one lone sniper, it's not worth the effort.
Take it from an old hand like me. You have a great future.
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Re: A Reply To Teenage Angst
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by StAiN on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 10:21:56 PM AEST
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Ok i know now for sure it was a mistake to hold onto you, to keep you in my life after i said goodbye everyone else.
You're a Coward Kate.
oh? you say you have 2wks to write a poem to make up for this?
-sorry hun, doesn't work like that.
don't call me. I thought i knew you.
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Re: A Reply To Teenage Angst
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by eternityandaday4u on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 03:43:43 AM AEST
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| look i think that you are a great writter and i really do. i think that you would do better if your world wasn't revolved around you. i think that you thought that he based his world on himself when really he didn't. he just didn't base his whole world around you. you wanted criticism yet you have to explain your self. if your truly could handle criticism then you wouldn't have to explain any thing. you could take it as it is and let the comment go. sometimes people need time to think about there selves and i find nothing wrong with that. |
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Re: A Reply To Teenage Angst
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by Katie-Kate on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 09:47:12 PM AEST
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| Thank you very much for you compliment on my writing. you are right, i was too quick to retaliate. a lot of things i've been doing lately ahve been based on anger, and i haven't thought anything through. i know you said i was explaining myself because i couldn't take the critisism, and you my be right, i just have to explain one more thing though. you were talking about 'he' and 'him' and how i don't think he's paying enought attention, i would just like to point out that it's not a jealous g/f thing where i want his life to be about me, it is actually about a close friend - a female. not a relationship kind fo thing at all. thank you again for you input. |
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