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Contributed by
stitches
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Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 03:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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my wrists are lonely
for the kiss of silver
my eyes are swimming
with the blood they crave to see
my mind is wrecked and dirty
my body was never mine
i gave them everything
but they wanted more
my happiness is crying
and i think someone is coming
i'll scream bloody roses
from here to hell and back
i'll never give you this
please...don't leave me here
"don't steal my innocence
the one thing i have left"
"please"
the b*****d stole it anyways
my life was mine, but belongs to you
your evil penetrates my every move
i don't want this anymore
take this
the soiled, the d****d
take whatever else i am
beat me, cut me, kill me
but please...don't hurt me anymore
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stitches
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2003-12-31 15:35:00]
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Re: please
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by CuttersAngel on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 04:02:31 PM AEST
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| Hey, great poem. I love how you did the rhyming. Keep it up!! |
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Re: please
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 04:29:51 PM AEST
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| I couldn't fully understand this one in the way that I prefer. Beautifully dark. Great write. |
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Re: please
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by deadly_blaZe on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 03:34:26 AM AEST
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loved the line... 'ill scream bloody roses'
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Re: please
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 07:31:25 PM AEST
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"my wrists are lonely" wow I know that all to well. This was friggin amazing my mind is desperately trying to do justice to this poem, but I cannot... so I'll just shut up.
Bobo (Joel)
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Re: please
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 02:35:07 PM AEST
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SUCH a powerful poem, sharp and beautiful - loved it.
charlotte x_x_x |
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