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Another Cut
Contributed by
CuttersAngel
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Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 01:33:37 PM in AEST
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Another cut, what a suprise
The shedded blood are my cries
My voice too quiet for you to hear
To listen to know you were my dear
Your ears too def for you to know
My explaining of reasons why this is so
It's funny how you say good-bye
It must have been too hard for you to try
You are my love and still in my life
Even though I'll be somebody else's wife
The pain, the burning, and the scars
If only you knew exactly how far
You don't love me, not like before
And it's so hard to deal with the pain anymore
And you can't love me and it be the same
There were too many mistakes, this was your game
Did you think I was lying when I said I'd stay
I had meant those words but now it's not that way
We've tried before to have what we had
But your same mistakes made it bad
You don't get it and I can't undestand
I remember how we use to hold hands
But it's not for me to comprehend
You are the one who caused the end.
Copyright ©
CuttersAngel
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2004-01-01 13:33:37]
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Re: Another Cut
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by shelby on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 02:53:43 PM AEST
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Re: Another Cut
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 06:08:55 PM AEST
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Wow... the emotion just emanates from this. I love your way with words. Another great write!
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Re: Another Cut
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 12:19:29 PM AEST
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| Wow... That was prett good. I'm sure the whole story is good too. I really liked this and I don't think there is a line I didn't like. |
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Re: Another Cut
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 11:23:17 PM AEST
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Was this about the love u had for your razor? If so I can relate to this quite a bit although i found it hard to decipher the message within not quite as straightforward as yer other poems, but thats not a bad thing just made it more intriguing.
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Re: Another Cut
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by StarBeneathTheStairs on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 05:00:01 AM AEST
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| I am loving this poem more everytime I read it....Really good, keep them coming... |
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Re: Another Cut
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by carebear on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 12:17:03 AM AEST
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Hello!
This poem really caught my eye it was very well writen with anger and saddness its a poem bout a love who didnt care to believe or want to try I like that :) good work!
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