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Thoughtless
Contributed by
alecfernadez
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Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 04:37:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Deep in the dark shadow realms of my mind,
One could only hope to dream off and find,
A self-explanatory question for my malice,
Something to question why I live in darkness
Its not my fault that i'm hated by peers,
Doesnt affect me; Wash away my bloodswept tears
Maybe its because i'm vindictive, volitile and misunderstood
Or Maybe its becuase I wouldn't if I could
I'm hated by all even by my own blood,
I might as well slit my throat and drown myself in acid
Because there always undermining my creed
Forgetting that I am there seed
Yet thoughtless and still alone
Unable to achieve something like a home
Unable to forget the beating and the drinking
Unable to pick myself up and stop myself from sinking
I cant get my past out of my head anymore
I'm still a child and I want to be loved
Instead I'm hated for what I am and shoved
I need it more than anything in the world
I need to speak or I wont be unfurled
Please someone help me from my own dreams
Please someone take away my screams
I need your compassion I need your love
I need to see that flying white dove
I cant take this anymore,
I'M NOT A WHORE,
I didnt ask for that, I didnt want it
I NEED YOU to get me through all this
Please forgive me for doing nothing
Please forgive me for clipping my wings
Please forgive me for never telling
PLEASE forgive me for coping
I fell for his lies and suaveness
I'm NOT GAY, i'm just thoughtless
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alecfernadez
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2004-01-02 04:37:25]
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Re: Thoughtless
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by Kie on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 06:03:34 PM AEST
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Firstly let me say that I think your poem is great. I felt so much emotion in your words. Hurt, pain, inner reflection. It really drew me in.
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Re: Thoughtless
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by forever_lonely on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 12:00:25 AM AEST
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That was a great reflection of emotion... im in awe of your style and the way you protray your feelings you have such a great talent.. but unfortunately like all great talent it stems from great pain.. dont be so hard on yourself all the time.... you never know where being alittle lighter might lead you next
all the best
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