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I said to the world
Contributed by
Hanno
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Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 04:59:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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I said to the world,GET STUFFED,
this year is going to be happy for me,
no more bad days or nights,
no more shrinking or backing away from fights.
I am just going to be happy
and that is all there is!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Copyright ©
Hanno
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2004-01-02 04:59:47]
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Re: I said to the world
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 05:42:26 PM AEST
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| Good idea. But mayhap reconsider the fighting part of all you will do is fight. Pick your fights wisely. Outside of that I think you easily conveyed your emotions and thoughts. Good job. Nice write. |
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Re: I said to the world
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by Kie on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 06:08:43 PM AEST
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I liked your poem. I also agree that you should choose your battles. I think you did a great job overall.
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Re: I said to the world
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 11:27:54 PM AEST
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The most important thing in life is to be content and happy. Not at the expense of others, but deep in your heart and soul. At some point in our lives we learn to live peacefully within our own skins.
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