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soul
Contributed by
cutey
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Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 03:52:42 PM in AEST
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NaturePoetry
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I love you from the back
I love you from the front
I love you with my soul
and heart i can't wait
until we can start i
want to share my laughter
i want to share my tears
i want to be your husband
want you to be my wife love
you with my heart I Love You
with my soul from me my heart
you stole so together honey
we grow old.
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cutey
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2004-01-02 15:52:42]
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Re: soul
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by Cristi on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 03:56:52 PM AEST
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| YOu have great potential, but i couldnt understand alot of what you were trying to say your words were in the wrong places sometimes. |
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Re: soul
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by Kie on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 06:11:57 PM AEST
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Your poem started out great but I got a little lost and couldn't follow parts of it. I thought it was really sweet and romantic.
Kie |
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